Articles
The
Washington Post
Sunday, May 19, 1996
Ode and Young; At Workshop,
Students Discover Poetry and Themselves
by Jacqueline Trescott
Zulaikha Edmondson, a
trim column of white shirt and blue-striped pants, was reading her
poem "Wise Words." The words seemed to rush out of her.
My poem knows the ways
of the world/ It can live, she said, the curl of her dark hair kissing
her chin. People in the audience may have wished Zulaikha would
slow down, but the 15-year-old was racing on. The force of having
a lot to say had overwhelmed her in the last few months. When she
paused, the onlookers cheered. The occasion was an evening reading
last week at the downtown Borders Books. A lacquered black lectern
had been set up beside the high shelves of show business books.
Elvis and the Beatles stared down, frozen in their youth, as members
of a younger generation -- Michael, Devin, Jeremiah, Rickey, Ayanna,
Brandon, Tiffany, Zulaikha, Jevon and Brooke -- read their own words,
some for the very first time in public.
This night's poets were
all students from Hart Junior High School, on Mississippi Avenue
SE, who became part of a workshop last fall organized by the D.C.
WritersCorps. Most had never met a published writer before Nancy
Schwalb, a slight woman with a coaxing manner and a fistful of Margaret
Walker Alexander's writings, walked into the workshop. Schwalb is
part of WritersCorps, a collaboration by the National Service/AmeriCorps,
the National Endowment for the Arts and arts agencies in the Bronx,
San Francisco and Washington. Besides visiting schools, writers
who participate in the program have fanned out to hospitals, libraries,
jails, shelters and community centers, carrying out a mandate issued
by President Clinton in 1994 to make a difference by teaching.
In the creative writing
classes at Hart, nearly 300 students are studying poets, poetic
forms and the synergy between poetry and music. They don't get any
school credit; eventually an anthology of their work will be published.
Six of them were named finalists in the local Parkmont Poetry Festival,
the highest number of any junior or senior high school.
To hear some of the students
tell it, they have come alive because they have discovered something
inside themselves.
"I thought it would
be fun," Zulaikha says of the course. She had written the obligatory
school essays, but no poems. "The words just started coming
out. Then I started reading [published poems], and I liked trying
to figure out what the poet was saying underneath the words."
In five months she embraced a whole new world, discovering the works
of Georgia Douglas Johnson, Langston Hughes and Ishmael Reed.
Inside Schwalb's bare
classroom, the learning process uses a couple of approaches. One
is to read a well-known poet who writes about issues the students
face. After reading Rita Dove's "Flash Cards," a reflection
on math drills, Tiffany Kelley submitted a work called "My
Problems Are the Zenith of My life." When she read it at Borders
last week, audience members were falling out of their chairs with
laughter. The teachers, said Tiffany, are "the top and the
bottom," yet They make my life a bowl of corn flakes/ That
have been sitting/ In milk for an hour. At another session, Schwalb
played the Fugees' remake of "Killing Me Softly" to illustrate
the use of metaphors and similes. Rickey Lewis submitted "As
Drifting Waves": I think about my life as it passes me by/
the sound of the sorrow as/ it taps upon my window pane.
"It's amazing how
frank they are," Schwalb says. "There is a boy who is
always writing about his failed love affairs. That is very brave.
What they are doing is recognizing their ideas. They are figuring
things out."
Now the young poets are
facing their public. Up front is Jevon Billups, 15, his T-shirt,
black jeans and sneakers smartly coordinated. This is his first
reading. For practice, he stood in a corner of the bookstore and
read his poems aloud. Then, making eye contact with people in the
back row, he demonstrated his performer's flair, letting his face
take on expressions of self-deprecating humor. His predecessors
had simply glued their eyes to the page and read.
Jevon thought poetry
was boring until he actually started writing. He immediately like
Schwalb's classroom style. "She gave us a poem and told us
we had to write one like it. Now that was interesting," says
Jevon, who's called "the Bishop" because of his seriousness.
In the school sessions,
he liked Schwalb's directive to write about his feelings. After
listening to John Coltrane's "A Love Supreme," and a poem
about Coltrane by Michael Harper, Jevon hit a Scott Joplin-style
reverie in "Feeling the Music": I feel as if I were playing
an upright piano/ about a hundred years old/ and every chord I hit
is beautiful/ and makes a new song.
But sometimes he thinks
Schwalb has gone off the deep end. Like the afternoon she gave them
a series of poems about rivers. "She told us to write about
any river, real or not," says Jevon. His mystification didn't
last long. When he read "The Niagara in You" last week,
his listeners were rapt with approval. I see a source of power/
that electrifies a great body/ When I'm dark you add color/ I don't
need your help/ let me be me.
For Zulaikha, the class
has become not just a weekly exercise but an expression of the self
she had locked in. "The poems were alive," she says of
her writing. "And [the experience] was getting away to a place
where I didn't know I could go."
SECTION: SUNDAY
ARTS; Pg. G09
LENGTH: 900 words
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